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i don't know what to call this

10/27/2014

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i held them close
for they were not worthy
i kept them distant
for you were not ready
but they ran the distance
they chased the sun
i let them go
i let them run
and in a moment of silence
they spoke to you
but in your heart you knew
the honest truth of no
for you were not ready
and they were not worthy
for you were not ready
and i was not worthy


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the author
10/27/2014 04:14:55 pm

i called this "i don't know what to call this",
but it looks the the moderator had a different idea.

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E. Z. Mon
10/27/2014 04:30:00 pm

Sorry, was trying to compliment you. I'll change it back. I get it man, artistic integrity is important - don't want to edit your art - just sincerely thought you didn't know what to call it so I was all like - damn son call it amazing!

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the author
10/27/2014 04:41:50 pm

oh, no.
i genuinely didn't know what to call this.
i just thought that i would provide some context to the name u had given it, because aside from u and i, no one else would understand.
thank you for the compliment.




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