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Cosmic fruit

10/3/2014

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Apple blossoms fallen
The fruit is cider now
Yellow leaves are falling

A child speaks with wisdom
A dog lives through it's actions
Affection never spoken, only felt

I've just become the master
Of the dream I'd once begun
I'm flying through the vastness
The kingdom of the suns


Mr. M.

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Emanuel link
10/3/2014 03:02:17 am

This echoes exactly how I feel about life today. Thanks for inspiring my current path. Beautiful poem. The imagery of "flying through the vastness The kingdom of suns" is so divinely regal. Thank you for this.

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Mr.
10/3/2014 03:45:55 am

Thank you for the kind words, Emanuel. I have so many feels about autumn, something about moving out of the vibrance of summer and into the coldness of winter drives me to feel introspective and appreciate the beauty of life. Peace

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Fawn Stitchman
10/4/2014 02:17:50 am

That was a gem short and sweet
Hope we will see more oh your poems

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